" I love the word 'indolent': a total lack of effort or commitment... but classy "

WORDS CAN MAKE OR BREAK YOU

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IN-CONFIDENCE COPYWRITING, EDITING, & PROOFING FOR CORPORATE CLIENTS
Proposals & Competitive Tenders that actually get read

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The Birthday | Bah Humbug | The Inheritance | The Stiff Shirt | One Last Cigarette | Keeping Stock | This (Playful) Life | What Errand Are You On?

"Chris you beautifully express the Prana experience... take a bow!"
WEB COPY & SOCIAL MEDIA MARKETING. PRANA APPLECROSS

In 2016, MARK CHEN wrote that humans, hunched over keyboards, are now busy not doing what they're good at but feeding Google, Facebook et al with 'keyword soup'. He's right. And as a writer and editor for SMEs, small family businesses and talented micro start-ups; I can tell you that if you're padding your web content (and paying SEO experts a premium to do just that) you are not persuading humans to believe in you at all.

5 years ago, Biz Speak was the main problem: pretentious language designed to impress investors and/or corporate clients. Take this example... an internal memo from an NGO to its front-line advocates (the poor devils charged with interpreting this stuff):

"At the end of the day, if we think outside the box, our communications strategies will exemplify state of the art clarity to consistently yet flexibly move our constituents toward underwriting our efforts."

OUCH! Firstly, their 'communications strategies' didn't exemplify state-of-the-art clarity at all. They lost me with the first cliché and it only got worse... frankly, for so long they used this tortuous 'corpspeak' to motivate their employees they were almost certainly arousing cynicism, apathy and (largely hidden) resistance. Today is not much different. Your customers can still spot the difference between disingenuous marketing, clichés, corporate jargon and genuine solutions. Reputations are hard won. #Just Saying.

" I just leave out the bits people skip." - Elmore Leonard

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